Wednesday, May 2, 2012

Yellow

It looks like the sun, bright
It tastes like pineapple, juicy
It smells like the daffodils, fresh
It sounds like the lions, loud
And It feels like the sand, rough

                                         -Abby
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  1. Carol CoffeyMay 14, 2012 at 8:22 PM

    Excellent! I like the parallel structure, and how you used all the senses, which good literature is suppose to do. Good job, Abby!

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